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Kenna Cauldwell's avatar

This is great! So much fun, and I feel like I learned so much about the world and the characters without ever feeling like I was reading exposition. Sorry that this won't work in your final piece, but I'm glad that it exists and didn't end up on the cutting room floor completely!!

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Amelia M. Burton's avatar

The tension in this was incredible! I couldn't stop reading! I know you said you don't plan to use this as the actual prologue, but maybe it could become a companion short story or something?

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